In Need of Beta Readers

Hi friends,

I just finished the first chapter of an original comic, and I have no idea what to do with it. I am, however, in need of some beta readers to critique it and let me know if it's any good.

If you'd like to read it and offer your thoughts, please provide me your email address and I will share the Google Doc with you. I have provided the first four pages to hopefully tempt you.

 

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